An Untold Story
(This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 32; the thirty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'An Untold Story')
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The Untold Story
that one day this beauty of your's will fade away,
and then with it will vanish your arrogance,
at that point nothing shall remain,
but good deeds that would be an epitome of your beauty.
Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day along with your beauty will subside your youth,
and then in vain will go your attempts at revival,
you won't have the zeal,
but good memories to cherish from your carefree days.
Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day you will reflect back on your life,
and think that why did you held onto the grudges,
they did no good to you,
but ruined your days by filling you with negativity.
Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day I too will dematerialize,
and then no will be there to pass on these words,
that shall remind people to live their life to the fullest,
but only the one to whom I'm passing on this message, You!
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Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
ReplyDeleteThis was interesting and I enjoyed all the way :)
Keep Blogging!
:) I agree with Nasir.. :) and I completely agree with your poem. But we forget these things when we are carried away and are blinded with the materialistic pleasures.
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Megha.
All the best for BAT 32 :)
ReplyDeletethoroughly enjoyed ... good work :)... btw did I miss something here "and then no will be there to pass on these words"
ReplyDeleteWe listened and agreed... :) All the very best...
ReplyDeletehey listen up sweetheart,
ReplyDeletethis was indeed beautiful.
Indeed an important fact of life :)
I was singing it along... nice one ...
ReplyDeleteNice one,good expressions :)
ReplyDeleteAll the Best
Very well written. Nice flow. :-)
ReplyDeleteListen miss , this is awesome-ness:)
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone :)
ReplyDeletein complete agreement...live life in present dont hold grudges or any negativity watsoeva...no time for all that
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT :)
nice! :)
ReplyDeleteBAT32-Apala
Very interesting one . Yes it's almost like a song , probably a rap no :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting thought process and expression.
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