The power "you" got

Bid a good-bye to the seen,
get ready to embrace a change in the scene.

Though the transition ain't easy,
you needn't feel dizzy.

Change is the need of the hour,
this is from where you must derive your power.

Just stand up for truth and learn to fight for your rights,
and I promise that it will make your days bright.

So, I wrote this poem ages ago. I typed it in my phone one day during train commute after being awe-inspired by Satyameva Jayate's that Sunday's episode. Okay, no more stories behind this piece of work. But, do tell me how did I fare.

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  1. Nithesh S9 July 2012 at 18:50

    Hi, Nice one.
    You could have made it better by adding lines describing how the dizziness builds up. More emotions about how stagnation has damaged the surrounding , etc.
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