So today is V-day; I'm not one of those who believe in it, and that you can conclude if you have read this post , and this post of mi...

V-day poem? Maybe!

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So today is V-day; I'm not one of those who believe in it, and that you can conclude if you have read this post, and this post of mine. Nevertheless, I don't prefer spoiling mood of love-birds. Hence, a Happy Valentine's Day to all you folks. Also, after a long spell of lack of creativity, I finally wrote this poem titled:

 "Dream turned Reality"

On a cheery spring day,
he saw her across the stream,
laying nearby the bay,
she was deep into a dream.

Her visage embraced a frown,
and that made the beauty look sad,
hence, to see that frown up-side down,
was the only wish he had.

All of sudden an apple fell on her head,
and with it she was awaken.
Hurriedly she wrapped up her camp-bed,
although she looked shaken.

When she commenced to leave,
he ran across to get near her,
she noticed him and stared in a dis-believe,
as everything to her seemed a blur.

He heard a shout; "Wake up"!
with it he was back in his room,
seconds after he was handed a cup,
and told by that very lady; "Get ready, dear Groom".
***

Frankly speaking, to me, only the first three stanzas make absolute sense. Maybe because I started this poem with a different plot and towards the end chose a different plot. And yes, later I discovered that this poem makes for a great song after I tried singing it with the tune of  "Hotel California" by Eagles. It would be lovely to get your feedback on the same. 



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1 comment:

  1. Excellent expression. Perfect rhyme scheme. Couldn't have written it better.
    Cheers! :)

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