V-day poem? Maybe!

So today is V-day; I'm not one of those who believe in it, and that you can conclude if you have read this post, and this post of mine. Nevertheless, I don't prefer spoiling mood of love-birds. Hence, a Happy Valentine's Day to all you folks. Also, after a long spell of lack of creativity, I finally wrote this poem titled:

 "Dream turned Reality"

On a cheery spring day,
he saw her across the stream,
laying nearby the bay,
she was deep into a dream.

Her visage embraced a frown,
and that made the beauty look sad,
hence, to see that frown up-side down,
was the only wish he had.

All of sudden an apple fell on her head,
and with it she was awaken.
Hurriedly she wrapped up her camp-bed,
although she looked shaken.

When she commenced to leave,
he ran across to get near her,
she noticed him and stared in a dis-believe,
as everything to her seemed a blur.

He heard a shout; "Wake up"!
with it he was back in his room,
seconds after he was handed a cup,
and told by that very lady; "Get ready, dear Groom".
***

Frankly speaking, to me, only the first three stanzas make absolute sense. Maybe because I started this poem with a different plot and towards the end chose a different plot. And yes, later I discovered that this poem makes for a great song after I tried singing it with the tune of  "Hotel California" by Eagles. It would be lovely to get your feedback on the same. 

Comments

  1. Excellent expression. Perfect rhyme scheme. Couldn't have written it better.
    Cheers! :)

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