An Untold Story

(This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 32; the thirty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'An Untold Story')
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The Untold Story 

Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day this beauty of your's will fade away,
and then with it will vanish your arrogance,
at that point nothing shall remain,
but good deeds that would be an epitome of your beauty.

Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day along with your beauty will subside your youth,
and then in vain will go your attempts at revival,
you won't have the zeal,
but good memories to cherish from your carefree days.

Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day you will reflect back on your life,
and think that why did you held onto the grudges,
they did no good to you,
but ruined your days by filling you with negativity.

Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
that one day I too will dematerialize,
and then no will be there to pass on these words,
that shall remind people to live their life to the fullest,
but only the one to whom I'm passing on this message, You!
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Comments

  1. Hey listen up miss I have a thing to say,
    This was interesting and I enjoyed all the way :)

    Keep Blogging!

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  2. :) I agree with Nasir.. :) and I completely agree with your poem. But we forget these things when we are carried away and are blinded with the materialistic pleasures.

    Regards,
    Megha.

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  3. All the best for BAT 32 :)

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  4. thoroughly enjoyed ... good work :)... btw did I miss something here "and then no will be there to pass on these words"

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  5. We listened and agreed... :) All the very best...

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  6. hey listen up sweetheart,
    this was indeed beautiful.
    Indeed an important fact of life :)

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  7. I was singing it along... nice one ...

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  8. Nice one,good expressions :)

    All the Best

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  9. Very well written. Nice flow. :-)

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  10. Listen miss , this is awesome-ness:)

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  11. in complete agreement...live life in present dont hold grudges or any negativity watsoeva...no time for all that
    ATB for BAT :)

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  12. Very interesting one . Yes it's almost like a song , probably a rap no :)

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  13. Interesting thought process and expression.

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